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A mistake |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
A mistake we cant ever fix. a mistake that lasts a life time and we stay do and never learn from.. we charge so much pain ourseleves and people who care about us.. we charge not only money but fear andworries .. we charge money that are not even worth to be cost at. we loose trust and loose family,and friends.. we loose life if we have no trust ...so why do we still wanna live??.!! is it because we dont have a heartt?? or is it because it just a game you play with?? for fun? for pain? for money? or is it becuase of the life we have?/ we try t fix but we still mess upp.. is there any chance we can make it up?? just disconnect our hearts?? our ears ?? or just go the way we want and forget families and friends?? can we ask for help?? or feel worries all our lives???.. we have no choice but to live and atleaste try to fix our mistakesssssss..and try not to get killed? |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I feel the same way as I did for the "how can I tell you" poem. You got all your emotions out well, which is one of the most important parts of writing poetry, but it wasn't really my kind of poem. Nice job anyways; I'm sure that alot of other people on this website will LOVE this poem, it just wasn't really my kind. ~Alli~ |
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