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Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
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0 posted 2004-04-16 02:06 PM



(This "poem" probably doesn't make sense, but I just wrote down my feelings!)
I used to be the girl you teased,
I used to cry and be the lonely one.

That happened a lot before; as a kid,
Now you love me, I know ’cause you’ve told.
You allways have been an enemy to me,
I couldn’t tell you first, that I  didn’t felt the same.


You’re allways behind  me, right next to me,
Sometimes it just annoys me,
Even your presence makes me sick.
You try to hug me and kiss me all the time,
If I felt the same I wouldn’t reject.


I can’t change my feelings, that’s who I am,
You must realise the truth and you must respect,
My last wish is; please leave me alone,
’cause to me you’re just a mate.
A friend I can talk to and laugh with.
The most annoying thing is;
That I can’t do those things,
I’m afraid of; you to look on it as a flirt.


Now, I don’t know how to act,
I’m scared of making you sad,
’cause you know allready you’re nothing to me,
don’t try to ignore it, it’s just the truth,
But you still try hard to win,
-To win the love I don’t feel for you,
I wish we could feel the same;
Our relationship as a friendly thing,
Because the things you do,
makes me feel unsecure!

© Copyright 2004 Fleur - All Rights Reserved
Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
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1 posted 2004-07-07 05:41 PM


i liked it, keep writing

~*.:Leah:.*~

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
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2 posted 2004-07-09 02:18 AM


its nice, but so hurt, when i'd like to share and the other leave me.....the worse u became feel unsecure with him
sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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3 posted 2004-07-09 12:24 PM


hey sis,,,
I really miss u ,,i have'nt seen u in a while,,,well this poem is amazing i loved it...i dont know why,,,i would liek to give it to someone ,,,,,,,but its just kinda not right for me lolol,,,,well i loved it...keep[ posting

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2004-07-10 11:27 PM


Wow . . . I enjoyed this very much.  I'm gonna save it, hope you don't mind.

Also, it's nice to see you back here again!!


~Alli~

Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
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5 posted 2005-05-26 08:47 AM


Thank you all! have missed you, you know Well, I've been busy, but will be around here.
Take Care! Luvs
Fleur

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