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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
I SEE YOU in my dreams. in my wishes. in my hopes, in my hands every night and day. wiTh a big smile that gives me joy IN MY HEART and happiness IN MY BRAIN.. YOU GAVE ME The respect that no-1 ever gaVe me, The honesty ,THE LOVE. THEOXYGEN\ The eyes to see the BRAIN TO CONTROL the HEART TO KEEP ME ALIVE the LIVING FLOWER the LIVING PLANET the LIVING SPIDER ,that makes its net bigger AND BIGGER... .... Now you leave? now you dream? now you hurt? is this what you want? is this your dream to leave me?? to kill me? leave me in pain all my life.? you came back begging but after hurting me ,you think im going to accpet?? im not a game for you to play with .! im not the ball for you to roll all day with! im not your dog to TRY ANDLEAVE ME WITH NOTHING..! but iam you MAID until i die .NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENDS I WILL ALWAYZ LOVE YOU. NOT ONLY BECAUSE YOU STILL LOVE ME BUT BECAUSETHE BEST MOMENTS I SHARED THAT I WILL NEVER TRADE IN ALL MY LIFE..- --------------- I HOPE YOU WOULD LIKE IT ..LOVE YEA ::^love^:: |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
No offense or anything... but... I really didn't like the poem. It didn't really make me "feel" anything, and I found it to be well.... boring. Sry. :[ ~Alli~ |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
its alright ..i respecr your opinion..well ummm...i just write poems usually when im depressed or like i feel like writting something ,other than tthat i dont lolol..well thanks 4 ur comment anywayzzzzz. ::^love^:: |
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