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UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

0 posted 2004-04-13 06:32 PM

I love you

I know I do not tell you,
Because I am afraid of what you will say.
I am afraid that you will not feel the same,
Only turn away.
I am scared that you will leave me here,
My heart will never heal.
Why is it that I do not have the nerve,
To tell you how I feel.
I want to tell you,
That I love you and that I really care.
My heart and mind tell me that,
I should not take the dare.
I think of you no longer wanting me to love you,
You turning your back on me.
I imagine that deep down,
You are only longing to be free.
Free of the prison in which you can be found,
Locked deep within my mind.
You longing to be released,
No longer be confined.
Why is life so unforgiving,
Why must it be so unfair?
Because with every thought of losing you
My heart slowly begins to tear.
Piece by piece,
It will shatter as it falls to the ground.
Until my heart,
Can no longer be found.
This is my fear,
The reason I distance myself the way I do.
All because I am afraid,
Of falling more in love with you.

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-04-13 06:37 PM

Wow...that's all I can say. It was very impressive because you expressed yourself very well and the rhyming flowed well, it didn't sound forced.
Once again, GREAT JOB!! I can't wait to read more of your work.

~Alli~

PS Thanks for commenting on my poem.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-04-13 09:14 PM

I liked this poem its very nice ,but i will give you 1 advice DONT LOVE DONT GIVE.....

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2004-04-13 10:26 PM

I really love this poem. Very well expressed.
I know you didn't ask for advice. But here's what I think. Tell him how you feel.
I loved someone for 4 years, and never once let him know I felt that way. To this day Im taunted by "what-if's", what if I had told him, ect. And I think things might be different today if I had because I think he felt the same, but neither of us ever said anything.
If I ever feel that way about someone again, I will let them know. And even if Iam rejected, at least I won't have any regrets or what-if's to face everyday. And who knows, maybe they'll even change their mind later.
Sorry this was so long, I just wanted to let you know what I went through when I kept my feelings inside.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

4 posted 2004-04-17 11:39 PM

OMG,I loved this poem.It described how I feel sometimes.It made me feel better to know that you felt the same way too.Keep up the great work.

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