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TheGirlNoOneKnew
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0 posted 2004-04-06 03:33 AM



This is love and it's not easy
it can get pretty complicated sometimes,
as you and I both know.
I took my time, you hurried up
and we never seemed to be able
to meet halfway,
yet I could feel your warmth surround me
even when we were miles apart.
It took us forever to get where we are,
to establish some form of communication
even if I had to chase you down for it.
You always hid your feelings from me,
leaving me to constantly wonder and second guess
and to come to the conclusion,
that maybe it was my fault.

Love takes time and needs room to grow
which is why we gave eachother space,
and began to lead seperate lives.
I would hear about you from others
from your latest conquests
to humiliating downfalls,
my heart aching for the proper solution
to this pain.
But there were no answers here,
only questions as to what went wrong
and my insecurities did enough talking
for the both of us.
I was the day, you were the night
for us, there was never an in between,
no matter how many times
we tried to make it work.

Love and sacrifice go hand in hand
which is more than I ever want to know
and is more than you were willing to give.
My heart isn't bitter, only bruised
by all the sweet words you once said,
which are now reserved for someone else.
We had our brief time together
and it was the happiest I've ever been,
though this you will never find out.
Because this is love and it isn't easy
it can get pretty complicated sometimes
and being in love alone hurts most of all
and I, not you, will always be the one to know.  

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1 posted 2004-04-11 01:59 AM


wow i know your pain
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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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2 posted 2004-04-12 12:09 PM


another pretty good poem ..but the only thing was you put  everything altogether and i did not actually understand it much but "hey" its very good and  it surely sounded like its from your heart..keep it up and keep writting.. with all my love and respect..

  "believe in yourself you will successed"

          "I PROMISE YOU"

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