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Teen Poetry #7

Sleep as well as i

swinging2bbvd
Junior Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-10-15 11:43 AM

Chandra, Sleep as Well as I
Each new night I welcome without regret
I see the beauty in each new sunset
Even as the night's icy air rolls in
I know my blood won't run thin
My swollen heart will keep me warm
Through what would be another sullen storm
Your truly in my arms tonight
I'll feel your form and hold you tight
And I know as I go into my sleep
It's our renewal of love that I weep
No more tears of lonely pain
The light you shine shows again
Though through great gaps we embrace
Knowing you still love me erases this space

Ronald J Walsh

[This message has been edited by swinging2bbvd (10-15-2003 11:53 AM).]

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-15 12:05 PM

good onnnnneeeeeeeee.

Quiet Acquiescence
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 70
somewhere out here

2 posted 2003-10-15 05:53 PM

Oh yeah that was a good one.

"No more tears of lonely pain
The light you shine shows again
Though through great gaps we embrace
Knowing you still love me erases this space"

I like those lines a lot.

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

3 posted 2003-10-15 06:10 PM

Very good, it has an intoxicating feel to it. Makes me want to go find that girl I'm chasing after: grab her in my arms and never let go. Another excellent piece to this stranger you call Chandra.

NJS

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