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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
there is no way to reach false gods from here the Irish widow knows this but still she keeps you and cradles you as a child in her arms you remember now how you ran through the woods for hours terrified of your own shadow believing in the power of memory choking on a reaction and everyone was nodding as light slipped through an approving sky how many times have you failed her? you were just a child in her arms and how we spilled her blood and ran because there’s a need to feed sorry lions the meat is tough but its just how they would want it if they want anything at all dozing off in your cautious career trying to tell the future through the ripples of an opinion just thinking of a life untouched but as a child in her arms you were chewing as you touch New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
Fantasic! choking on a reaction and everyone was nodding as light slipped through an approving sky I highlighted this but I really loved it all! |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
Fantastic... |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
 don't know why this has not gotten much attention, but it deserves it...nice write Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
forgot to add it... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
as light slipped through an approving sky ======================= something about that line fascinates me. Hey Jac... so nice to find you in the blue pages again.  A haunting write full of symbolism and imagery...well done poet sir. I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
thank you all for your kind words New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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