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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148
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I hide in the shadow of your dark opinion feeling sentimental about faded bruises I may have lost the battle for your affection but I have won the war I'm all yours |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is hard to respond to. liked it so much, dont know what to say? "feeling sentimental about faded bruises" damn damn damn  |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I can't explain why exactly, but I'm drawn to your poems. I'm glad you joined, and although not my favourite, another great poem. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
I really appreciate your comments. Even though I am at a pretty good place in my life right now darkness is mostly what still leaks from my pen. It's really nice to know someone enjoys it. Thank you both! |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I like the way your poems tell a story, and sometimes you dont know exactly what it is meant to mean...The way that it gets my little mind working...I love it. I really liked this one... Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I know how it is, darkness always seeping from you, even when it seems the most unlikely time. I tend to do the same thing. short, but so strong. I'm impressed. |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
short but strong is what I was going for I want to twist your strings in as few words as possible |
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