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0 posted 2004-07-31 04:49 PM


It is a  typical Friday,
Peeps be gettin ready
To go places, while I choose
My room as a hiding place,

Books at seven I be hittin,
My neghbiors walkin down
Them set of steps in a rush
On their way out givin a stare,

I heard my mom yellin,
Telling me to come help,
When all I wanted to do
Was to be drinkin & ballin,

But that was no game plan tonite,
God is tellin me to study hard,
And do all my chores at set times,
Rest is a dream for some other nite,

My momma callin me again,
For she made us some dinner,
She tired as hell yo,
But she came through no matter,

Inside I wish I could ride,
To the beach or the ballet,
To the clubs where the hunnies be,
I don’t wanna sit on the sidelines,

I got to shake this insanity,
Before it gets me going crazy,
On that path where I keep wishin,
Before I know it, I am down rite trippin,

This lifestyle of mine is no fairy tale,
I struggle everday wishin for better day,
But all I know is my past in my heart,
Got to take it one day at time and ride.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
LucidityNow
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 118
Canada
1 posted 2004-08-03 01:21 PM


You have great determination. I'm enjoying these poems so far, keep them up.

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

nicole leigh
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since 2007-09-19
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Eau Clair Wisconson
2 posted 2007-09-21 08:26 AM


wow dat was good!!!!!@!!

nicole leigh pitt

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