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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-27 01:00 PM



Alone

I feel the darkness today,
painted across my swollen eyes
masking the truth
so I can hold out a little longer,
to have faith in what might be.

I sit here, sore of shoulder,
tired of carrying the weight,
wishing for someone to share it
but knowing I will be going it alone.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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muted
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1 posted 2004-07-27 08:24 PM


in spirit, we are here sharing this journey with you

just to let you know that the burden never becomes less heavy, its you who grows stronger.

Mad_Hatter
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2 posted 2004-07-27 09:17 PM


Muted put it very nicely.  It's ironic though, that the greatest load we have to carry is ourselves.  We'll make it somehow, in the end.
Defective
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3 posted 2004-07-29 12:57 PM


Never pray for a lighter load, pray for a stronger back.
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4 posted 2004-07-29 07:20 PM


Amen to what Defective said!
yv
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5 posted 2004-07-30 04:20 PM


That was beautiful.  I too feel the weight of sorrow and pain on my shoulders.  But with faith that life will yeild happiness, one can surely survive any battle within one's self.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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