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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-07-14 01:58 PM


There's just something about it
I know they don't appreciate
Desire too strong to ignore
Shelter from a can
For the one I love

It hurts to think it
I love to breathe it
Just want to hold it
Total love and conquer it

My vision has changed a bit
Blurry to everything else
God soars over me in navigational love

Simply just desire
Gentle breaths of fire from my heart

Even if I'm down to nothing....

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA
1 posted 2004-07-14 04:36 PM


I had to read over this a few times and I think I get it now. Very interesting.
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2004-07-14 07:58 PM


I wish I had that kind of comfort in sprituality...
sadly it defies me.
good write...probably not your best.
But still good.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2004-07-17 11:54 AM


ok
River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2004-07-22 06:39 PM


hey you...I can agree slightly that it's not your best work...but it makes me want to know what you are talking about, I'm a little distracted right now but it will come to me eventually anywho, keep writing. no matter what we say. keep writing.

           - Bon

Running out of pain

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