The Tase of Vomit mixed with Sand

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Dark Poetry #4

The Tase of Vomit mixed with Sand

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-07-05 01:51 PM

Liquid pain flows from my eyes
thoughts puddling on the ground
i am like a barren tree
my leaves, my soul is stripped from me
the wind lashes at my skin
i breathe in the cold, harsh air
the smell of death surrounds me
each thought inside my head is
1,000 tones and the weight is dead
a vulgar taste lingers in my mouth
a taste so foul and so bland

You better count your lucky stars that everything I wish for..doesnt come true

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-07-05 09:33 PM

hey I like this, you've got some talent, keep it up!

- River

Running out of pain

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2004-07-06 09:57 PM

This was good...and I like your signature...

~J.Lynn

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

3 posted 2004-07-07 02:46 AM

thanks <3

You better count your lucky stars that everything I wish for..doesnt come true

Theory
Junior Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 23
N. CA. USA

4 posted 2004-07-09 10:00 AM

nice imagery here. really enjoyed

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