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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
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0 posted 2004-06-01 12:58 PM



Who comes, came before,
comes again, never went

Returns in time, to places past
To overmind, to make it last
Green they trim, brown they wet
A garden of sun, yet I forget
To lament the loss of singular plant
To die of thirst in a sea of storms
To ride the wind, to feel warm
Forgotten petals, crushed and bled,
Stain the path, behind me red
Scream, scream, for the children left behind
Cry for them if you can, ive forgotten
Cry for me if you can, ive forgotten

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

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CrEaTuRe
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since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
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1 posted 2004-06-01 01:48 AM


It really has a good flow to it and liked it a lot!
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
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2 posted 2004-06-04 12:59 PM


Wow. I really liked this. I loved the cry for me if you can part at the end. It was brilliant. I loved it.

Kissa~

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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