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Hollow_Emptiness
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0 posted 2004-05-28 03:20 AM


Shadow propped up on the wall,
Dancing to music from the rain,
With a language that has no words,
A manikin posing in a statute,
Cemented into the ground,
Stiff from the time of solitude,
So, so tired.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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1 posted 2004-05-29 10:50 AM


This poem reminds me of a times when I feel tired dealing with the bad stuff life has to offer. Nice piece. Wish it was longer.
CrEaTuRe
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2 posted 2004-06-01 01:46 AM


Sounds like my life story ... Good read care to work on for a longer part would love more.


ViNa

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