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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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0 posted 2004-05-11 11:31 PM


* this is not meant to support, or encourage suicide... quite the opposite actually.

Second Thoughts

Thoughts of lonliness flood my soul.
Just ending it once and for all,
seems like the perfect plan.
I dont have much further to fall,
as the blood drips from my hand.

I dont think, i just do it.
I've got nothing else to lose.
The pill make me go numb.
Conciousness i refuse.

I can feel my heart beat slower,
with every breath i take.
Suddenly i'm having second thoughts,
but it's already too late.
With only one choice,
I have chosen my fate.

I am here to tell you,
it's not too late for you.
There are so many good things in the world,
things i never got to do.

So go into the world,
and open up your eyes.
You never know what you'll find,
you might jsut find a blessing in disguise.

* I wrote this when i was going through a hard time with family and friends.. and i felt really.. alone. I don not support suicide in any way, and this is not meant to encourage it, or support it in any way.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
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1 posted 2004-05-11 11:32 PM


wow wonderfull keep writting love and respect//

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
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2 posted 2004-05-16 01:31 AM


Thanks S_C_P I really apreciate your comments, even though i would like more, i am glad you decided to reply! It was sweet of you.
Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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