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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-04-23 09:16 PM


(Dedicated to a friend who kept her credulity.)

The way that she was,
Saw her thoughts turn wild,
So confused,
Her eyes like broken windows,
She can’t see,
Because the glass taunts,
Prickle her pupils,
So many voices,
Running through her head,
Tiring her mind out,
No one understands,
Least of all her.

Which way to run,
When there’s no place to hide,
She’s frightened,
But she won’t let on,
She won’t say why,
Because she doesn’t know,
Blinded by what people tell her,
She grasps the only answer,
No one there to say no,
Except her,
She holds on,
Desperate to make it,
It could be too late,
But she won’t let it happen,
She survives.

Author’s note: Keep in there, it’s never too late to ask for help.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

© Copyright 2004 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-04-24 04:19 AM


omg

hu is that?
that sounds harsh and painfull
i hope its no one i know

Oh god Good luck to them.

Why else would i feel so bad for them if it wasnt great writing? Bloody good Courts

LOR

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-04-24 08:17 PM


Sorry Lor, I can't say, I promised, but yeah you know them. Well, more heard of them. But I really really can't say.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-04-25 01:24 AM


oh okay i understand. But if there is anything you need like just someone to talk to about this you know my email and my phone numba.

LOR

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-04-26 01:59 AM


I'm sweet lovie, really.

Hollow

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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