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0 posted 2004-04-23 12:15 PM



I have slept,
While the maggots crept,
Upon on my mind,
The evil kind,

I return now,
You wondered how
With a dish served cold,
Watching my rage unfold,

Through the streets of hell,
I ran ringing the bell,
Of sanity and of justice,
Not within my reach,

Lost was I, you thought,
With courage I fought,
Picked myself throughout time,
No wonder I commit such crimes,

Now that I am back,
No trait I will lack,
Making you see that I am one,
Humanity’s end has now begun.



© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
loner187
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 106
Upstate New York
1 posted 2004-04-23 11:23 PM


You have a real unique piece of writing here. It's one that sort-a makes you think and wonder. Nice, I still don't completly get it...yet again I rarely get anything completly.

What if the hokey pokey is what it's all about?

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
2 posted 2004-04-25 06:56 AM


this is amazing....
it leaves you guessing about what exactly you are saying yet giving you images that will ispire so many different endings....
and i say again. amazing...
keep up the writing..
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
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3 posted 2004-04-26 10:12 PM


Wow... it really makes you think... I love it. Amazing write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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