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spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

0 posted 2004-04-14 03:44 PM

Where were you
When I needed you
I was screaming for your help
Where were you
When I was calling
I was struggling to stay alive
Where were you
When I was struggling
I was holding out my hand
Where were you
When I was reaching
I tried to keep my light on
Where were you
With your light
I couldn't see anything
Where was your hand
With it's strength and guidance
Where were you
With words of reassurance
Where were you
With your soothing presence
I can't see you
I don't hear you
I won't feel you
Where were you
When I needed you
Were you sleeping or out somewhere
Cause I know you weren't here
Did you notice your phone ring and beeper go off
Did you hear me knock on your door
Where were you

written january 1, 2004

"don't like this world anymore. tried to run out the door. didnt work and now im on the floor. can you hear me? do you care? please help!!! "

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-04-14 10:46 PM

I find myself asking that qustion a lot lately. I loved this...it was amazing.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-04-14 11:00 PM

That was cool. I liked. Thanks!

*Saved*
Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2004-04-16 12:37 PM

yeah...I...have asked this question more times than I can count. good write though. I feel it.

- River

sleep my precious slumber

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

4 posted 2004-04-16 12:58 PM

thanks guys. i was kinda despret when i wrote this. in a bad place..... yeah but thanks again for the support

"don't like this world anymore. tried to run out the door. didnt work and now im on the floor. can you hear me? do you care? please help!!! "

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

5 posted 2004-04-19 07:19 PM

wowwwwwwwww...nice poemm.....im going to save it in my cuttest poetry file lololol...but gr88 poem keep it upp

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

6 posted 2004-05-06 03:17 AM

wonderful poem..i truly enjoyed this one you did an excellent job

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spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

7 posted 2004-05-07 01:18 PM

thanks guys. it means alot to get back on the band wagon again. it's been a while. love lots

"don't like this world anymore. tried to run out the door. didnt work and now im on the floor. can you hear me? do you care? please help!!! "

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2004-09-07 06:36 PM

very good

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