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eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2004-04-03 06:41 AM




Getting off my chest
The story ends.
I will find a way.

Denim obsessed,
As stone turned to flesh,
Lava of transformation

When we laughed indoors
The blissful tones bounced
Off the walls, and crumbled
To my ear, I heard it all

The rain fall fast and crash
Into the ground.  The days
Go by, washed away.  Vintage.

What I found in that dresser door
To this day I can't see.  The memory
Fades fast, and it wont last

The way your picture does.
I will find a way.  Don't
Treat me like I never accused you.



© Copyright 2004 matt cockrell - All Rights Reserved
River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2004-04-03 07:01 AM


oooh...sad. nice imagery, i like =) catch ya later bro.

       -  River

sleep my precious slumber

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-04-03 08:51 PM


Amazing poem. Very sad, i like it...

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2004-04-04 09:37 AM


OHH Matt this reminds of pictures of you by the Cure . . .  must listen . . .

have missed your writing . . .

http://www.lyricsondemand.com/c/curelyrics/picturesofyoulyrics.html

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2004-04-29 05:04 PM


What I found in that dresser door
To this day I can't see.  The memory
Fades fast, and it wont last

Real nice, eor. Haven't read too much of you lately. Keep the pen flowing. Later.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
5 posted 2004-04-29 10:55 PM


amazing  ..wow keep it upp
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