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darkstar
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Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2004-03-27 12:51 PM


leave behind the ashes
try to burn anew
scatter the remains
into the sea
never to reflect
churning waters
washing it away
the sea seems blackened
the lunar smile barely cracks the sky
but I, full of doubt
step forwand from the shore
further into the watery abyss

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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
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1 posted 2004-03-27 05:42 PM


hmm... I like. This was interesting, and very different.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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