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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
Posts 248


0 posted 2004-03-22 07:42 PM



With one foul sweep
It could end
Think about it...all the pain, the anger, the hurt
...The everything...
disappearing with one quick motion
one sudden movement
and 16 years of
pain and hurt
is gone
forever
yea, its going to hurt,
but only for a minute
then its over
and you can silently slip into your
infinite unconciousness
that bit of pain is worth it
and by enduring one last hurt
all of it could end

It wouldnt matter to anyone anyway
nobody cares for you now
yea, thats right>nobody
the only person
who ever did
is gone now
and its all your fault.
you know that right?
hell yea you do
you pushed him away
he loved you
and you ignored him
he tried to break through your barriers
but you stopped him, over and over again
so he moved on
and it killed him
and you.
so now with one foul sweep it can all be over
now
all thats left to do is to
say goodbye to the pain

© Copyright 2004 Keryn - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-03-22 10:48 PM


Oh.... so sad.
I know how you feel. oh wow do i know.
It doesnt end it though.
It just causes more pain.
If not for you then the ones that love you. You may not see that, but it does.
I know i didnt see it,
or actually want to see it really.
Dont ask me why.
I really REALLY love this poem
SO...... much!!

* i'm savin this to my library thang.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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