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Cold_Eternity
Junior Member

since 2003-11-06

Posts 15
Canda

0 posted 2004-03-05 05:09 PM

Sado Masochist Angel

Hello there, the angel from my nightmare,
Where did you go, I could not sleep tonight?
Some of us are sado masochist angels,
Walking in a world of our own;
A lone soul, he stands down by the corner,
Hands in his pockets, what is he thinking of?
Fingering a razor of stainless steel,
He sits there with heart of fire though;
He is cold as ice.
We stand there, burning in ice cold nightmare,
Standing there with a desire for nothing more,
Than another’s hand to call our own;
So we, stand down by the corner,
Dreaming our dirty dreams of love;
With guns in our pants and knives in our pocket,
All the while fire burning at our hearts.
Experience lets us feel pain,
And as the blade slices deep,
I can only begin to think of,
The place I was falling in;
My fall was long and hard,
From the curb to the pavement;
But what blade cuts deeper than our love?
My friends reached out to save me but,
The car that struck simply didn’t care.
So now my wings no longer carry me
Im an angel in your nightmare
No longer feeling pain.
Am I real or only there
Who really does care?
Not you because you sleep tonight…

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

1 posted 2004-03-05 06:06 PM

Was it just me or were the first 2 lines from the song "miss you" by blink 182?
O well dosnt matter becos the rest of the poem was very gud i really enjoyed it.
hope 2 read more of ur poems
xxgothikaxx

Cold_Eternity
Junior Member

since 2003-11-06

Posts 15
Canda

2 posted 2004-03-05 07:26 PM

Yea sry bout the blatent plagerizing I forgot to remove those when I put this draft in just in a bit of a hurry again.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2004-03-06 04:51 PM

you dont have to take them out, just put them in quotes, and if you want give them credit, but as long as they are in quotes you should be fine

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-03-06 08:10 PM

Nice...nice...~lol~ I love this poem. It was beauty-fewl!! ~lol~ Very awesome.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Cold_Eternity
Junior Member

since 2003-11-06

Posts 15
Canda

5 posted 2004-03-06 11:36 PM

Thank you for your replys especially vampire who did not bring up the issue of the first lines. Im tempted to put them in quotes but after doing some searches on google I came very quickly to realize that they are widly used by just about every one even before blink came out with the song so because the line is given meaning in the end and because it appears to be open for use to the public I will keep it. Thx to everyone for rplying

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