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WHY?WHERE?WHEN?
| Dark Poetry #4 |
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WHY?WHERE?WHEN? |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England 
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Where am i in this world? Do i fit in? Do i even care? Why bother to become what people expect? Life is how i live it and how i see it, do not try and tell me diffrent. if you look and see me fall, or see the scars upon my wrist will you come and offer help or will you shout and bawl. Why live up to what you are? Why look up to you? And if you shout And i reply And you get angry or mad Just stop and ask yourself WHY?WHERE?WHEN? Did i go wrong, Just like all the parents out there you think that we are angles. Well Think Again. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey this was cool! i liked it but I loved ur other one cus it was so alternative.... this was good as well cus it really got ur emotions out i loved this bit if you look and see me fall, or see the scars upon my wrist will you come and offer help or will you shout and bawl. I still rekon i prefer ur vampire one! catch ya on the flipside btw i get the impression that ur a girl... am i right???  darknessPlease answer, I'm calling just to find out if you could be there for me when I crack - finger 11 |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Truly written and well written. good work. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this was really well written and i hoope to see more of your work soon..... keep up the writing Mel |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
Thank you very much every one i love the feed back. More vampy ones comin soon darkness. and yes i am a girl. |
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