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desperado16
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since 2003-12-27
Posts 7


0 posted 2004-01-12 06:54 PM


Quiet envelopes,
Whistling winds
Heard,
I linger,
Steadily evaporating
From your thoughts,
I bid you,
Goodbye

While you roam,
Free
Of love and tribulation,
I remain
Bound,
By love
For you.

This love,
Turned
Great,
Forbids sanity,
Must escape,
Until sentiments
Wither

Wordless sounds
Spew from
Trembling lips,
Cheeks glisten
From restrained
Droplets
Surging down,
Heart seeps,
Body bleeds,
I perceive,
The intricacy
Of impending
Tasks

I fear,
When I barricade
Myself,
From you,
Resentment will consume,
Friendship will perish,
I'll diminish,
Regretting
Not holding you,
At all

Silence breaks,
Static actualizes,
Goodbye unmasks
Itself,
Half rejoices,
Half grieves,
Either way,
I forfeit
You.

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devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
1 posted 2004-01-17 03:20 PM


I can't believe this has went without a reply...this is amazing!!

Glad to see you posting here...this is something to be proud of and kudos to your emotion hun. perfectly done.

~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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