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Dark Poetry #4

Emotional Storm

Shereen
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 57
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-01-08 12:03 PM

EmotionalStorm

Rainclouds are forming,
Threatening to destroy the clear blue skies above me.

A strong wind begins to blow,
Scattering my thoughts in every direction.

Swirling tendrils of brown obstruct my vision
As long-fingered breezes tug at my hair.

Great, emotionless drops of water stinging my face,
I seek the shelter of the Sugar Maple in the front yard.

Darkness encompasses all around me.
Flashes of searing light penetrate the black heavens.

Only in darkness can light be found.
Briefness does not hamper impression.

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-08 04:30 PM

very nice

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

2 posted 2004-01-08 11:09 PM

WELL...THIS POEM IS REALLLY SAD.....LISTEN SHEREEN...WHATEVER MAKES U MADE JUST BE PATIENT...GOD MADE IN EACH PERSON SOMETHING VERYY NICE VERYY VERYY INTERSTING SOO JUST USE IT AND LOVE IT DONT BE ASHAMED OF WHO U R OR WHAT U BELIEVE IN ITS YOUR LIFE AND YOUR OWN WAY OF THINKING..

tainted_love123
Junior Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 11
Australia

3 posted 2004-01-10 04:35 AM

i think that this is a well constructed poem. it had alot of feelin

" Silence is a virtue... little can possess... "

Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2004-01-11 01:57 PM

well written, I enjoyed it.

Vagabond
Member

since 2004-01-23

Posts 163

5 posted 2004-01-27 04:21 PM

Only in darkness can light be found.
Briefness does not hamper impression.
i like that part

Vagabon the Lost One

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