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coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

0 posted 2003-12-25 03:15 PM

weigh anchor
hoist anew
this body
flag

soul
swung yardarm

my albatross
your
wedding vows

I do

crossbows
proclaim
feathered kills

maliced
bolts

misaimed

astray

strike deep
the wedge

a well kept
heartbreak

bleeds
brightly

upon
the sharks

for wind

© WFS 2003

"Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, and the body is our tomb." Socrates

[This message has been edited by coyote (12-25-2003 03:15 PM).]

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2003-12-25 09:30 PM

I like your creative style here, well done

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2003-12-25 09:55 PM

Well dang, I wish I could say that I can't relate . . .
And one can be at sea too long, I suspect.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

3 posted 2003-12-26 09:17 AM

Thanks, tao.
For the read and kind comments.

CB 8)

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2003-12-26 09:20 AM

Aye, Thanks Cap'n Kraw.
Glad ya could relate to the "voyage".

CB 8)

Necro Draconis
Member

since 2000-05-19

Posts 115

5 posted 2003-12-31 03:40 PM

Nice style and fun to read. Two thumbs up!

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

6 posted 2003-12-31 06:28 PM

Thanks for reading and replying so kindly, Necro Draconus.

CB 8)

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

7 posted 2003-12-31 06:56 PM

wow . . . this is interesting. I don't lie about these things, by the way. I think we all should be a little more selective about comments. If every poem is "well written!!!!" then they are all worthless, for nobody can tell the difference. Long rant, though, not for here. Again, nice write.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

8 posted 2004-01-01 05:14 PM

Ahh yes...I couldn't agree more, m'friend.

Thanks for the read and your very quotable comments.

CB 8)

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