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Annihilator -- duet between Kaoru and me
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Annihilator -- duet between Kaoru and me |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Annihilator I want to shovel water down your throat -- slick, sure words that choke and choke and kill off any protests flat. You deserve nothing less. A degeneration of wing, I will fly you no further as the pendulum swings. Your worth no longer strung by my philosophies, I want to throw you in flaming sky, let you witness the burning of my hymn.. You will kiss the face of the sun, cradle its head in your burning arms. I want to watch you drip waxy tears. Melt like a candle, melt like a candle so not even the wick remains. So not even a trace of the words you say can cloud the day in rainless soot. You drown in heat, a summer red. An abstract downpour of sacrifice, you give not a speckled need to connect. As with all, mostly you, will be forgotten.. your sigh which overbears the wind.. Drown in your sorrows, my end will not swiftly follow.. Already, I'm beginning to miss your deceits couched in love. Once we slid with the sky, darkening down with the sun, walking the moon's true face. It became night too soon. The stars blind where beauty died. I can't tear away the seams and sleep. Where will I lay? A grave, of willows you weep, I try to contemplate.. your existence.. Fall, oh shoot as star, the end of the world as our meeting place. A palace in the sky, you rule over me, I am a slave to your chill. A scrape, of rusted nail you penetrate me.. not warn me of your pain.. Your infliction, I crave. You shovel water down my throat -- in tear-soft hands of wax and choke and kill off all my reasons why. There you burn, up in the sky. I need your blasting heat again. I need your awful eyes again. I need to feel the rush again of drowning in the deep, with you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mikey and Meg . . . ahh romantic poetry , I do adore it so *grin* this is brilliant: A scrape, of rusted nail you penetrate me.. not warn me of your pain.. Your infliction, I crave. a drug, for sure Beauty from two amazing writers xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wow, you two... What Sue said...this is brilliant. Hugs to you both...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Poetry with a leather edge, m'friends. Intense, and a slight kink of sensuality... love it!! Not sure who wrote those first two lines, but? "I want to shovel water down your throat -- slick, sure words that choke and choke" there's some duality of sensual imagery there that is...well...smile..exciting (oh analyze me later!  )and the degeneration of wing... very nice touch there. A wanting worthy of Kali. "Melt like a candle, melt like a candle" The reptition here is hypnotic and just plain sexy. The tone changes a bit in the following verses, but the smell of a greedy coupling still permeates. This is some passionate hunger, satiated...with thoughtful lingerings. *blush* enjoyed !!! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Get out of our heads, Sen! Lol. Glad y' enjoyed.  |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
"your sigh which overbears the wind.." Nice image! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
uuhh. you guys are too good. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW my favourite lines.... I want to shovel water down your throat -- slick, sure words that choke and choke your sigh which overbears the wind.. A scrape, of rusted nail you penetrate me.. excellent stuff! M fate is not just |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, all. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Big Friggin Grin...been waiting for this |
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