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Dark Poetry #4

From Your Torture

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-06-10 05:37 PM

From Your Torture

In a world of endless pain,
I lay in darkness never
Feeling a moment of joy.
Why did you have to do this to me?
At this moment if scrutiny,
It’s like you took my arm,
And cut it for me.
So many times I’ve wanted
To do it,
But never found the strength.
You caused me all my pain,
My weakness and anger.
Like I said,
It’s like you took my arm,
And cut it for me,
It’s like you took my arm,
And cut it for me.
From your torture,
I’ve ended up here.
Thanks a lot,
Now feel your guilt.

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-06-10 07:14 PM

wow Julianna!! This is amazing!!!!!!! Love it!!! (Library)

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

2 posted 2008-06-21 05:45 PM

Hahaha..this is good. The last part made me laugh. Great expression of emotion here.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2008-06-21 08:38 PM

Yes. The end clinches this piece. Love it!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

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