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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-12 08:51 PM


my heart is pounding
so loud the world can hear it
the world
can you?
your laughing at me
laughing at me
with your friends
only they matter
i'm just a pile of flesh
with a beating heart
so fragil
about to break
but thats ok
i didnt need it anyways

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-12-12 11:28 PM


Nice work Chelsea.  I really enjoyed this piece.

-GIS

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[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

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