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muder is okay, if you're feeling alright with me |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
He said this was happiness Said the world could be all mine A roll of tape and 3 weeks later “You can’t trust anybody” This light is sure and burning The basement is wet, with dissimulation His laugh is quickly growing But I don’t even care I’m just worried that I never said goodbye Because it’s you that matters This river my only friend now It holds me in its cold hands I can almost see the city lights I can almost remember “this is happiness” I never knew he would be so right If I could write goodbye On this bleeding sky I would say: “The only thing I’ll miss is you, But I’m quite alright, We’ll meet again sometime And that time will be better Than the last. Ask no questions You’re gonna’ be alright.” [This message has been edited by Mad_Hatter (12-09-2003 10:08 PM).] |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Mad_Hatter, nice write. How did this one slip by. Real nice lines in this one. A roll of tape and 3 weeks later “You can’t trust anybody” Especially this line. It doesn't get any more original than this. Outstanding. poe If nothing is something |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Thank you x 1000 |
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