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TheGirlNoOneKnew
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since 2003-12-04
Posts 92
PA, USA

0 posted 2003-12-06 02:10 AM



Lonliness shatters my heart from the inside
a caged mind cries out with agony
I squeeze my eyes shut and hold on
for just one day, just one more day.
Welcome to the hell I call my life
where no one cares about anyone
all they care about is their problems
never giving a damn about mine.
Pictures of the old days come to view
of me, of you, of all of us
sitting together and laughing
doing the things that friends do.
I don't have a single friend now
tell me, why have you all left me?
Are your boyfriends more important
than knowing how I have been?
Maybe I expect too much from people
but I never expected to be so alone
everyday it's like a constant struggle
fighting to stay sane in this fragile mind.
There are some moments I really miss you
you're not the same person you used to be
have you forgotten about our memories?
about the person who was always there?
Still I am cast aside to the shadows
a dark cloud hanging above my head
watching as you all go on living
wishing deseperately
that you'd ask me to join you.

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SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-12-06 05:24 AM


Well if I ever get a Chevy SS I'll come pick you up, and we'll go for a ride.......wanna come along? hehe...only if you don't mind a fast ride. hehe, And can I see a ?
Love,
Terri~


Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-06-2003 05:25 AM).]

cleopatra
New Member
since 2003-12-02
Posts 8

2 posted 2003-12-06 03:20 PM


this poem has brought tears to my eyes because i know how it feels to be alone and to loose friends. thanx for an awesome poem.
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-12-07 06:29 PM


Hey Girl:

your reading my mind here

everyday it's like a constant struggle
fighting to stay sane in this fragile mind.

YES and it continues
but it gets easier, kinda
*smile*

beautiful writing

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2003-12-08 09:34 PM


I have been here so many times...it cuts deep, doesn't it? I hope you find better friends or that these ones pay attention again.  nice write =) catch ya laterz.

         - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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