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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-12-05 09:07 AM


Drunken demons
Steal midnight souls
Under cover of dark

Possession of wayward fools
Feed the fires of greed
Under shroud of this evil night

Shadows in the corners
The chill on the neck
The touch on the chest
Fills the room with
The bitter taste of fear

On this night
Earth is but playground
Of the damned

If only dawn would come
Bringing Jesus or even Santa Claus
Then it would be all right

But soon realize
That evil and demons
Exists in hearts
And behind eyes
Not the scapegoat of night
Which we blame our darkest sins.


[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (12-05-2003 04:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-05 02:35 PM


That evil and demons
Exists in hearts
And behind eyes
Not the scapegoat of night
Which we blame our darkest sins

Truer words were never spoken Brad, nicly done again.  I always look forward to your poems.

darkness_witch
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2 posted 2003-12-05 05:08 PM


As you can see Im new here
This is the stuff that I want to be able to write.
You have an amazing way with words.
Please post more poems
I look up to you and your writing with disbelief at your talent.

mysticpoe
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3 posted 2003-12-05 09:14 PM


Brad, your imagery is becoming very interesting. Don't stop.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-12-05 10:40 PM


thank you
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-12-06 08:03 PM


aHH  Brad so so true . .
and I tend to have a liking to
the night . . .
*smile*
beautiful writing
xxoo

junemac
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6 posted 2003-12-07 03:28 PM


excellent imagery here brad.

loved this one

hugs june x

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