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written from the eyes of another (help with a title)
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
The hatred in my heart is my strength Made by anger drawn out at length Each word you spoke a lash across my face Why is it you treat me like I’m a disgrace? Is it because I am not who you wanted me to be All you want is for you to be a reflection in me No free thought just a cold image of your heart Now you hate me for you know there is no end to this start This creature you did create knowing you are the same All the darkness in you born and given a name Yes I am your flesh and blood I am what you begot Know I am a reminder of what you wish you had forgot Makes the blood in your veins run cold with fear Knowing that now your hatred is so near Do you wish me to leave and you be left alone? Leave your sanctuary this broken home. I would leave with only the greatest pleasure I am sick of how you torment me at your leisure Now I leave you and your so called happy home To start my own life and leave you to rot alone you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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BobbyBoy Junior Member
since 2007-08-22
Posts 21West Yorkshire |
An appropiate title may be- SEEK HELP! or Raging Bull, it tends to fit the theme of the poetic musings well. Failing that Rage or no hope, or you could just call it Dracula, sprinkle some blood on it and market to the masses. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow there is something about your poetry that I just love this poem was no different really loved it the flow was great too. Krysti |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
I decided to go with the title of "Reflection of you" i wrote this poem for a friend whose mother is trying to force her life on her daughter. she agreed i could post it here to get peoples views... Thank you hunnie  you seem to be a close follower of my work which i am very grateful for. I think i should let it be known that all of my poetry is written from experiences in my life which i wish to share with every1... alot of my work is too...graphic in the sense of self harm to be posted here. if you want hunnie i could email you a few of themyou watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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SoyCoCo New Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 2 |
I can relate to this poem. My mother and I have never gotten along and these words really hit home. |
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Emily =] New Member
since 2009-02-18
Posts 1 |
This is absolutely amazing! My heart just melted to the sound of your poetry. It's true, sadly true. =] |
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