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Loverlost
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since 2003-11-25
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0 posted 2003-12-02 10:24 AM



The leaves have fallen from the trees
As hope has left my heart
The wind of change is blowing quite a breeze
And just one tiny part is left of
"All the things I'm going to do"
And the
"You'll be proud of me, someday"
The rest I fear
Have blown away

I'm weak
I know
I tried to grow -  tall as a fir with no though for roots
Not for me the
"Take things steady"
Or doing things the "proper" way
I wanted it all
I wanted it NOW
I wanted it
Bloody yesterday

Taller and taller the fir tree shoots
The classic
"He's too big for his boots"

Perhaps if I had been an oak
Slow but strong - making no demands
So big broad and solid
Everyone knows where he stands

Or maybe even a willow - who bends with every wind
Allowing storms to move him whenever they've a mind

But
An oak tree grows so slowly
And willows wallow in ditches with bowed heads
"That's not for me"
I wanted the quick way to riches
So
Fast and furious up I went
No roots to show but never bent
Soon I stood tall and proud
Talking nonsense
Very loud
And of course
When the bad weather hit I didn't stand a chance
Ended up
Down in a ditch
Now no one gives me a second glance

The winds of change are cruel indeed
Bringing failure
And despair
Why is life so bloody hard
Oh, God!
It isn't fair

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

© Copyright 2003 john Ward - All Rights Reserved
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

1 posted 2003-12-02 11:38 AM


Hey, Loverlost. Life is Ok when you can control that part of it, which is you. Everything else is basically taking are of it selve. Jump in to please and help others. This is a good thing. but know when to jump out too. Again - control, and only you can really control you. Nice write on an emotional subject. The best for the Holidays my fellow poet.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-12-03 07:53 AM


beautifully written!
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-12-03 01:51 PM


Winds are a whisper of God reminding there's time for change...that's what I think when I feel a breeze..it's finding the change I need to make that's the key. That's just my personal thingy though. just me.....
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

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4 posted 2004-05-17 04:23 AM


I do understand
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