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Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2003-12-01 08:31 PM

I’m giving in again
I knew you’d be my friend
Until the end
Fading now
I fall apart again

The vermin always played
With the string
That held me together
And now they’ve all malfunctioned
What am I going to do about my lack of pain?
My heart’s just a machine
Can you hear it beat?
Can you feel it need?

A feeling; brave
Got so rearranged
Things just shouldn’t change
I wish I could explain
This undertow just never goes away
The air is full of regret
The umbrellas of the world counteract my threat

I’m going to let it rain
And never let it stop
I finally hit the bottom
And I’ll never reach the top
I’ll await another rebirth
And reinvent my world
I don’t want to remember
The way she made me feel
The skin was just a costume
And now this flesh, revealed

Tomorrow’s never coming
Because I put it on hold
How does it feel
To be left on the line?
Leave a message
I’ll get back to you
As soon as I’m over this…

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-12-02 07:51 AM

SO much pain in these words!

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-12-03 07:53 AM

no responses now that is plain silly

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

3 posted 2003-12-03 06:19 PM

Thanks for your response, It makes me feel good when people take the time to respond to my poetry, thank you.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2003-12-06 12:06 PM

wow
this is dark poetry at its best

amazing writing hatter

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

5 posted 2003-12-06 03:12 PM

Thank you very much, that means much to me.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-12-07 06:21 PM

Ryan?

may your rebirth come soon

I’ll await another rebirth
And reinvent my world
I don’t want to remember
The way she made me feel
The skin was just a costume
And now this flesh, revealed

this is an amazing stanza
well done

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