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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2007-07-29 12:26 PM



I hear a voice with a title authority
My mind is blind
And the wild heart of God has other plans

My guitar sings in thick forest
Of the glories of my LORD
And authorities loom near
Is it a threat?
My bloody knife suggests I keep quiet
But its no longer afraid

Azul of my father and mother
Why do you tread on me?
How can you impose?

Civil War awaits, while everything I touch is huge
And the voices of men compete over my destiny
Who, do I dare, will decide for me?

Its right, its correct
My ancestor's cry has now re-entered a descendants mouth
And I cry for... FREEDOM!!!

just to be happy...

© Copyright 2007 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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1 posted 2007-07-29 10:51 AM


I felt a lot of passion when i read this. Nice job

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2007-08-03 04:43 AM


Yeah, its pretty intense... actually I wrote it in an on-line coffee shop, and when I left I was totally determined to go out and make something happen with my music...

The Torch Light Parade was going on in downtown Seattle.  I stepped across a street and cops started running through the massive crowd to take care of someone acting stupid, and I heard 2 loud gun blasts and later I overheard a cops radio saying "Suspect down" Its pretty intense, because it seems like the guy could have been the one to write this poem.  

blah... stories...  

Thank you.

God bless,
In Christ,
-GIS

just to be happy...

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