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Dark Poetry #4

teenage love story.

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

0 posted 2007-07-27 12:19 PM

The raindrops hit my window fast,
and I know it won't last,
here, in my room, it's so peaceful,
everything seems so dull,
this is the time to set my thoughts free,
but it's okay because there's nobody here but me.
I think about the past,
and notice how things turned out and didn't last,
I think about the present,
not knowing what's going to happen;asking god for one little hint,
I tell god how happy I am with my life,
telling him I know I want to bis *HIS* wife,
I start to think about all our memories,
and I laugh because I think about how he's such a tease.
His cute little smile,
and taht one special laugh he does every once in a while,
I'm so happy I'm your girlfriend,
and your the reason for my mend,
before, i was isolated,
but you're the reason why i made it,
Since I'm sitting here writing my feelings out,
I must tell you I do have a doubt,
because everything good never lasts,
and everything good goes by way too fast.
I'm scared the same thing will happen again,
the same thing that happened back then,
I'll give my heart out;and it just won't be enough,
it'll make life once again rough,
you'll out of nowhere loose that feeling,
and I won't be the girl who'll get that ring.
I don't want to end up crying over you,
I want something new,
I learned to open back up,and I gave you my heart,
please, don't tear it apart.
what i say is true
and i mean everything I do.
but, I trust you, so I'll sit here,
and try not to worry,
I dont want this to be just another "teenage love story."

Becca.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-27 01:58 PM

Again, i really enjoyed the poem

But the rhyming seemed forced...

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

kasey191
Junior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 33
Australia

2 posted 2007-08-16 01:33 AM

I really liked it.

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