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carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
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0 posted 2007-06-28 12:11 PM



sometimes it hurts to be here
i know why
but sometimes it hurts to be here
i'm not here to talk about how she smells
but i will

he'll drive me to drink and she just
has all the answers

sometimes i'm not even here


can you taste her, wicked with chance
can you make her stick, stuck and romanced


it hurts to know just what you'll do
so here

I've got a story for you

we walk lonely, connected lives
we stalk, that which pleases us

man, it REALLY hurts to be here


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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2007-06-28 10:41 PM


What can I say?  People really freakin suck dude... Take Jesus for instance.  He did everything he could for us and we whacked him.  

I could expound on this thought, but the moderators would delete it.  Keep writting.  You're pretty good.

Craig

just to be happy...

Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
2 posted 2007-07-06 11:40 PM


Indeed, sometimes it hurts to be here, even when sometimes you're not even here.

This dangles the past before my eyes...it's like trying to understand the misunderstood full moon, having complete control of nothing and loving every minute of it.

It's been too long, carolina. Too long...

Purity

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

carolinabeen
Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69

3 posted 2007-07-07 12:24 PM


Indeed it has my friend. It sure would be nice to get together soon and discuss well, anything as the wax melts upon the ardvark table. Leave me an email through here I guess and I will let you in on ALL the ways you can get hold of me


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