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MarkG
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since 2007-06-21
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0 posted 2007-06-21 07:48 PM



too late

I never thought that I would hear
so many words you said
a testament against our love
now gone and dead

I wish you all the love
your heart can forever hold
it is now too late
to change the end of us
my dearest friend
I am now lost
I will not see your dark eyes again
or hear the calls from you
like so many nights
a love you might
have felt was worth
more than you did give
I no longer live
within a world
with a chance for us
to make up for all
we now leave behind
one last call
I made to you
but you had no time
to perhaps find a way
now your words today
spoken at my grave
will not pass through
and the tears from you
are all in vain
the regret and pain
are yours to keep
im underground
darkness fills
no subtle sound
a single rose upon a stone
with love you now place
but I’ll never know
you came too late


© Copyright 2007 Mark Gammill - All Rights Reserved
blue face
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 92

1 posted 2007-06-24 07:07 PM


Love it!
Hope to read more.


Sarah


BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-07-01 07:09 PM


Oh my god! I loved it I feel your pain, it's like you do everything you can to keep them there, but they just don't seem to care. Then one day they come back, but you can't let them it because you're afraid of the pain they might bring. At least, that's what i think I really liked it. Nice write.

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

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