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spiritwithin
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since 2007-06-13
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0 posted 2007-06-13 06:16 PM


Charcoal dark clouds approach
preparing their relentless outburst
unyielding rain will soon replace
the solid brown turf beneath these feet

Lighted signs offer a recluse
to hide away the fear
brightened lives inside
concealing the tears

Yet motivation lost
nothing to gain
lack any feeling
no sense of pain

Stationary watching
red lights and green
no movement forward
unable to sing

Voice lost its passion
can’t make a sound
unable to hear
craft a ghost town

Now drenched with a deluge
thoughts soon, will get clear
Enter cantina
then go through a mirror

© Copyright 2007 Thomas H. Smihula - All Rights Reserved
blue face
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 92

1 posted 2007-06-13 07:24 PM


nice write


BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-06-13 10:05 PM


hey i really liked your poem. nice write, hope to read more soon...

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

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