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Dark Poetry #4

What is this Feeling

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-04-26 12:32 PM

What's happening to me,
I can't even breathe,
These thoughts that I have,
I just can't concieve,

I've never felt this way,
ever in my life,
not even through depression,
when I tried to end this strife,

Now I don't know what to do,
or how to tell someone,
I don't even know what it is,
I'll have to wait until it's done.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Rottiestyl
Member

since 2007-04-19

Posts 60
Illinois, USA

1 posted 2007-04-26 05:18 AM

Sometimes, being alone means. . .your spending quality time with your best friend. Very sad poem indeed.

mged
Junior Member

since 2007-03-29

Posts 39
ND

2 posted 2007-04-26 10:00 AM

hunnie this is soooooo good. I love every thing that i`ve read of your`s.

KEEP ON
WANT TO READ MORE
MGED

MannyNelemi
New Member

since 2007-04-27

Posts 9
Houston

3 posted 2007-04-27 12:01 PM

WoW...i love the first four lines...beautiful poem!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-04-30 12:49 PM

thanks for the replies

hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

5 posted 2007-05-15 11:55 PM

i love it.
Felt this way before.
it's so ....words can't even explain it.
=] keep these poems coming!

Becca.

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