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greysolace
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since 2006-03-27
Posts 71


0 posted 2007-02-08 12:07 PM



This constant warfare between you and I
Will only stop when one of us dies.
And though my heart says that I should forgive,
My only desire is to see you not live.
This game that we play has gone on for too long
Like someone playing the same old sad song.
I’m tired of fighting, I want this to end
So be a good sport and let the games begin.

Im so tired of your worthless words
So tired of your uselessness
I just wish you would go away
And its time for me to end this

You push me around like im nothing to you
Like im subject to all your whims
Letting your selfishness take control
But you’ll learn that im not like them
I am someone to be feared
That someone who will win
Im tired of playin this game with you
So be a good sport and let it end

Im so tired of your worthless words
So tired of your uselessness
Its my time to shine to sit back and watch
As I finally end this

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
greysolace
amaya the phoenix
Onyx Dragon

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JeffD
Junior Member
since 2007-02-06
Posts 28
CT
1 posted 2007-02-08 07:38 PM


Your words were beautiful yet deep and dark.  They moved me very much.  Thanks for the poem
RavenSmith
Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53
Oregon
2 posted 2007-03-03 04:50 PM


Wonderful Poem! I sware, at times so level of insanity in a good way enters when we finally know we are WORTHY of more, and searching for the exit sign while the hits of lies still come. Its hard to know and be there but something refreshing enters when we leave. Loads of loss comes and its something we learn to want to bare so when we turn back, we see what we once called loss as a beautiful goodbye gain.

~Best Regards,Raven Smith

Seeker72
Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
3 posted 2007-03-05 01:11 AM


I liked it very much, it seemed to flow too quickly (could be me) yet it left me wanting to know more.

Very nice.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2007-03-05 06:57 PM


I like gray from time to time.  Jesus loves you.

-GIS

(moderator, if you would delete this comment.  I didn't mean for it to come up without my signature.)

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
5 posted 2007-03-05 06:57 PM


I like gray from time to time.  Jesus loves you.

-GIS

When the chain that holds my wallet
snug is broken,
I find the truth in that I own nothin.

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