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cherrys_rule
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0 posted 2007-01-14 07:04 PM


Inside of me

Deep deep down inside of me
there's a hole that hasn't mend can you see?

My boyfriend, accused me of cheating.
So it came to the point where I'm not believing

He chosed to beat me half to death
He almost got to see me take my last breathe.

I wanted to stand up for my rights,
but all he had to do was knock me down with another fight.

I can't tust another guy ever again,
for all this crap that happened.


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-01-16 12:12 PM


I sure hope you figure out what to do. I don't want to tell you what to do but be careful ...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2007-01-17 01:08 AM


I am truly sad, and even sadder that your trust has been shattered.I only hope through time you might be able to see that not all men are the same.
cherrys_rule
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3 posted 2007-01-25 08:23 PM


so far the guys that I date are all jerks they only want one thing. But I bet there's a good one out there for me... hopefully.
Courtney

L. Ottanio
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since 2007-04-17
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4 posted 2007-04-19 12:48 PM


I am sorry this happened to you... it's happened to me too.  you will eventually believe in yourself enough - to open your heart to love - but please whatever you do -
if a man puts his hands on you in abuse whether physical or sexual - run the like the devil is trailing you.

my relationship with a guy when i was 16 almost got me killed... and it took 6 more beatings, a broken nose, dislocated jaw and several years to finally get enough confidence to leave him.

don't ever let anyone hurt you. run and then call 911

infralie
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since 2007-04-24
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5 posted 2007-04-24 03:09 PM


wow ur not still wit him are you well hmm sorry but ur stupid if you are well bye just my thought on the matter bye
cherrys_rule
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6 posted 2007-04-24 07:36 PM


no I'm not with him anymore... Thank God.
But if I was then I too would call myself stupid. He is now in jail, hopefully for life. But I'm not sure.

cherrys_rule
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7 posted 2007-04-27 10:01 PM


Oh just for some heads up poems from me, they are probably gonna be about him... since now he is out of jail...
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