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buckysimone
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since 2003-10-19
Posts 27


0 posted 2003-11-22 11:15 PM


shaking
your hand underneath
masks of jesters and lies
disillusioned by
smiles of youths
scents of elderly homes
homes to the friends
friends of abusive lives
living the lives
the lives through thick pricket paths
dirty tattered jeans
rough fingernails
runaway paths surrounded
mirages of roses
finding exits
exits never to exist
in a life of dirty paper bags
cries for help
grab my hand
my savior
shaking
your hand underneath


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-11-22 11:18 PM


Hey Bucky,

this is an amazing write you have here
I got soo much out of it

for some reason it left me
with the notion of alcoholism
and the reaching out for help
also, the notion of just souls left
with no one to help them
beautiful writing
xxoo

Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-11-24 10:17 AM


well done
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