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Angels in Our Pockets
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Angels in Our Pockets |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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Angels in our pockets both of light and dark darkness hiding demons in corners in the light the light exposing fear as they crawl in bed at night angels in our pockets and there is more than just a few angels in our pockets wise up to what they do heeee heeee... |
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Guthwulf New Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 7New Zealand |
Although i felt it flowed at times, i think in general it lacked balance. I really liked the last part: "angels in our pockets and there is more than just a few angels in our pockets wise up to what they do" I think with a bit of work this could be a clever twist on things that bump in the night. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you. It actually agve me a creepy feeling when I wrote it. Weird...anyway...sweet dreams Heee Heeee  |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
thats...wow...thanks for the reply on my poem. In love I start to realize that some things only seemed to be what they were. |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
very interesting perspective Thank you |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Like the flow of words though it leaves one hoping its a lil longer. Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I wish angels could set me free, I want to fly and be free. Nice poem. I enjoyed it. -GIS just to be happy... |
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