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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2006-11-06 06:57 PM



I just want you to know
I love you so much.
But when I say you need to stop,
I really mean enough is enough.

I'm sorry, but I don't want to see you anymore.
Infact I need to run far away
I can't go back to your place.

There's so many memories
There were so many tears
There were so many fears
It doesn't really matter anymore
Nor do I care.

When you took our relationship to a new level with me, all I wanted to do was scream.

I hadn't realized I was getting raped
I was shocked that you were doing this
I couldn't scream,
It felt like my lips were shut with some scotch tape.

When you were done
You left me cold, just laying on the floor.
All I did was watching you walking out the door.

So all I gotta say
screw you screw that
screw this
screw you and me and our relationship, that never even exist

© Copyright 2006 cherrys_rule - All Rights Reserved
Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2006-11-07 09:19 AM



I have to say this poem opened up some old wounds. I can relate to this poem and in a way I guess that's really kinda messed up.

You did a great job though!
I heard what you were saying loud and clear.

Very nicely done.

Hugs and Hershey bars to the talented poet!

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

2 posted 2006-11-12 01:12 PM


thanx so much, but it happened a long time ago and I had one of those thoughts. And he popped right in. So I just had to get the thoughts right out on the paper. But thnax for reading and replying. I appreciate it alot.
secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14
Posts 74

3 posted 2006-12-29 07:34 PM


I thought this was really good. I remember that day. It was really bad. If everybody had got the chance to jump him, I bet they would. Wait they did. haha. Well you did an awesome job expressing your feelings.I hope to see more from you Courntey
cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

4 posted 2007-04-24 08:14 PM


thanks for caring so much you two. I hope your lives are better then mine.
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