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rockbabe
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0 posted 2006-10-23 06:00 AM


Each time I peak the point of decisiveness
I reach a place between the Known and the Unknown
That leads to the Disfigurement of my Dreams

On the brink towards complete exultation
A path filled with Boundaries,
Complications,
Limitations &
Uncertainty

Do I follow my heart despite the Confusion?
Do I take my life, my heart through this Spinning Tornado?
Look past the Uncertainty?

So much to Say, So many Questions …
So much Confusion,

I, Despise this Tomb filled with Torture to the Soul
Non consensual Entrapment
A place containing Emotional Disorder  
Twisted within Total Confusion

[This message has been edited by rockbabe (10-24-2006 07:05 AM).]

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rockbabe
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 105

1 posted 2006-11-13 07:14 AM


Still wanting to know what you guys think of this one?

Thanks R

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