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morgie_mouse
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since 2006-09-08
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0 posted 2006-09-08 10:45 AM



i lay here in the night air,
looking up at each bright star,
and wonder what you are doing,
were youve been,
and were you are,
you left myside awhile ago,
But my heart wont let you,
Im sad and lonely without you,
but i try not to let it show,
As i drift of to sleep,
You might be gone for now,
But all the memories i'll keep.


Shane if your reading this please understand i had to let you go but i will remember all tha fun times we had together!! all the laughter and all tha tears we cried together as well.....

everyone please tell me wot u think!!

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lanaia74
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since 2006-08-25
Posts 67

1 posted 2006-09-08 10:52 AM


Oh so sad, I felt the anguish in your painful words! Well done!
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