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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-08-11 10:46 PM



By Heart

Each passing day more restless
Pacing the lair, of emotional rooms
Unable to cry a river red enough
To drain the sea from my soul

Strength is my own enemy
Yet, the best I can give for you
Never knowing if God sends test or treason
Hoping beyond reason, to let my very blood

Is friendship not love first and more?
And is it true that once then, never to be again?
Was it just too much the most I ever wanted for?

Drop by drop, through time undaunted
Just a calculated rhyme you tinkered
Burned into my trust, a fated pulse
That I am forgotten without a tear

Have mine, spilled uncontrollably
Held back in frail futility, wanting only you
Nor could I ever share the grief before
Humility is for certain my very beauty

Until you came, uncovering my eyes
To honor my own feelings undisguised
A challenge to be fought and won

Deserving you more tenderness per serving
That I should fade in silence with the rain
Live the love I feel beyond the pain
Not knowing how to make each beat resume

Filling to capacity and left to loom
Wandering the shores my heart implores
For my footsteps sink silently in sand
Dreaming of drowning

Copyright Kkh 8/11/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sorrow
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Ireland
1 posted 2006-08-11 11:49 PM


beautiful poem ThisDiamond! I love the imagery in it!
Bobomo
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2 posted 2006-08-12 09:11 AM


a wondefull poem.

"..That I should fade in silence with the rain.."

exquisite!

Thank you for posting this!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-08-12 04:34 PM


Kathleen~

Such an aching emote ... you pour the dark ink well~

'Drop by drop, through time undaunted
Just a calculated rhyme you tinkered
Burned into my trust, a fated pulse
That I am forgotten without a tear'


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2006-09-03 08:32 PM


So much emotion within this write...exposing
the feelings of the giver so sharply and
clearly...  Most certainly a shift of genre.

nick_lyss
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5 posted 2006-09-03 11:21 PM


thats a great poem. really good one. i hope to read more of yours
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