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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2006-07-28 07:59 PM




My feathered path of life
Based entirely on each and every decision
That I make

I can do the right thing
Fear that pin-prick decision
At the very tip top of the sharpness of mind
Will I tip right or will I tip wrong

Demand from me
Lie to me
Mockery of me
Handle it Craig, be a man...
Don't be stupid
Trust what you cannot see
Redeeming me

Collect a grain upon grain
Just the golden dust
God direct me
I disobeyed and sat on the throne

The rainbow which flashes from me
Through me, in my blood,
Wrapped tight around my spirit for all to see

Stick your needles in my brain and push the tiny around
Put in the state of now
Get off me
Jesus, I'm sorry, God bless me

It's not about me  Its not about me
It's not about me  Its not about me
I've misconceived, its all about you

To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love.

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2006-07-28 09:09 PM


Hey, Craig! I think I'll let my e-mail to you serve as most of the reply to this; however, strictly from a poetic standpoint, I really and truly liked this very much. I was inside of this one when reading, and with total understanding... from perfect choice of words! Right on!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

trUstNooNe
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since 2006-05-21
Posts 91

2 posted 2006-07-29 09:09 AM


wow i like that alot, but your not the only who forgets about it being all about God we all slip...nice write!*
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2006-08-05 02:07 PM


Thank you.

God bless,
In Christ,
-Craig

To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love.

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